Monday, April 30, 2007

National Poetry Month Recommendation: Marianne Moore

Here's something you can't say of many Modernist poets: in 1968, Marianne Moore threw out the first pitch at Yankee Stadium. (Take that, Skipwith Cannell!) I understand it was a big, sweeping curve that just nicked the outside of the plate, and that Mel Stottlemyre asked her for some pointers later that evening.

She also suggested the names Intelligent Whale and Utopian Turtletop to Ford Motor Company. They went with Edsel.

(Both of those stories sound like elaborate hoaxes. I sort of wish they were, and I'd thought of them.)

A fine article on Moore is here.

Here's a poem called "To A Giraffe":



If it is unpermissible, in fact fatal
to be personal and desirable

to be literal—detrimental as well
if the eye is not innocent—does it mean that

one can live only on top leaves that are small
reachable only by a beast that is tall?—

of which the giraffe is the best example—
the unconversational* animal.

When plagued by the psychological,
a creature can be unbearable

that could have been irresistible;
or to be exact, exceptional

since less conversational*
than some emotionally-tied-in-knots animal.

After all
consolations of the metaphysical
can be profound. In Homer, existence

is flawed; transcendence, conditional;
"the journey from sin to redemption, perpetual."



(Pardon the font change. It was the only way I could get the line breaks and spaces right.)

And this is "A Jelly-Fish":


Visible, invisible,
a fluctuating charm
an amber-tinctured amethyst
inhabits it, your arm
approaches and it opens
and it closes; you had meant
to catch it and it quivers;
you abandon your intent.


I'll let Moore's work speak for itself. Honestly, I don't know what I could say that would be worthy.

* My thanks to the eagle-eyed and (I assume) Marianne Moore fancying J.C.P, who caught my mistaken transcription. I had had "unconventional" and "conventional" in place of "unconversational" and "conversational".

5 comments:

  1. Boy o boy though rhymes from that first poem sheesh! Our Exagmination of his Factification for the Ululation of Determination. That and Existence are the only two words that don't end a line in L!

    The Hood Company

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  2. Moore was quite a poet.

    Thanks for all your comments during National Poetry Month, by the way. It was nice to get feedback from you and Robert.

    And others.

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  3. Everyone needs something! We try the hardest and rest.

    The Hood Company

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  4. Anonymous7:41 AM

    Dear friend, sorry... but... the correct version of Moore's poem is:


    TO A GIRAFFE

    If it is unpermissible, in fact fatal
    to be personal and desirable

    to be literal — detrimental as well
    if the eye is not innocent — does it mean that

    one can live only on top leaves that are small
    reachable only by a beast that is tall? —

    of which the giraffe is the best example —
    the unconversational animal.

    When plagued by the psychological,
    a creature can be unbearable

    that could have been irresistible
    or to be exact, exceptional

    since less conversational
    than some emotionally-tied-in-knots animal.

    After all
    consolations of the metaphysical
    can be profound. In Homer, existence

    is flawed; transcendence, conditional;
    "the journey from sin to redemption, perpetual."


    (Complete Poems, by Marianne Moore, Penguin Books, 1994, p. 215)


    Best regards,

    J. C. P.

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  5. Tow corrections:

    1) "HoNer" to "Homer"...

    2) "does THAT mean that" to "does it mean that"


    J. C. P.

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